Monday, February 1, 2010

Real World Grammar

The ad that uses the semicolon I imagine thought that "Trading Foreign Currencies" was the same as "Make money from home" when it's really not. It would have looked better if it was on another line... in the same font... but that's just my graphic design side speaking.

The commas 1 file shouldn't have had a comma after "Whiskey." Perhaps this mistake was made because they were describing the place it was made, therefore, a different topic.

The commas 2 file I didn't find anything wrong.

The commas 3 file should have read, "Dell-sliced Turkey Breast with lettuce and tomatoes..." Apparently they got caught up in listing the ingredients. Lettuce and tomatoes go together.

The colon file I didn't find anything wrong again.

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